Rules to Live By Blog Hop Second Day ~ Featuring Dianne Fox
Want to know more about one of the stories in Rules to Live By, check out this snippet from What Might Have Been.
What Might Have Been by Dianne
Fox
Stories change over
time, for a lot of reasons. Sometimes, it’s the realization that an early draft
isn’t the most effective or powerful way to tell the story, sometimes it’s the
input of a good editor. Either way, these kinds of changes can mean that entire
scenes or chapters don’t make it into the final version of a story.
That happened with Master Key. We went through at least
half a dozen drafts before we settled on the version we submitted to Riptide,
and cut several scenes in the process—and then, of course, there were more
changes based on our editor’s suggestions.
Every now and then,
it’s fun to think about the story that might have been. The scene below is no
longer in Master Key because it
didn’t fit the story we wanted to tell, blurred the focus on Navin and
Marquis’s growth as they find their way to forever, together. But perhaps it
fits into their future...
Deleted Scene:
"I want to beg
for you," Marquis whispered, stretching out his arms. It didn't feel strange
to admit something like that, not anymore.
"It makes me
crazy when you're submissive for me," Navin murmured. He lashed Marquis'
wrists to the posts at the head of his bed with a few quick movements. Either
he knew his knots or he'd looked it up just for this. He reached back to cup
Marquis' caged cock. "This is so fucking delicious I can't even think
straight."
"Yours."
Marquis moaned and arched again. "All of me. I don't want anything
else."
Navin didn't go as
slowly this time, pushing two and then three fingers into Marquis. He fucked
Marquis hard that way, twisting his hand, curling his fingers down to hit him
just right inside.
Every kiss, every
touch, every twist and push of Navin's fingers was gasoline on the fire of
Marquis's need. He pleaded with low, desperate sounds and the writhing of his
body. He loved this, loved Navin so much he could hardly breathe through it.
"I like playing
with what's mine." He bit Marquis' ass sharply, then kissed it. "I
want to hear you come for me."
"Oh God."
Marquis put his hands in his hair—or tried to. His wrists caught. That was when
it sank in, finally, that he couldn't move. Navin had tied him up, just like
he'd asked so long ago...and he couldn't get away. All the tension went out of
him and he moaned, breath coming fast, heat racing through him.
"Please."
"I like you
like this. Helpless. Mine." Navin had long, clever fingers and he knew
everything Marquis liked, inside and out. "I'll take care of you, I
promise." His grip on Marquis' cock tightened and his thumb rode over the
head again and again while his fingers worked deep inside him.
Marquis
shook and cried out, writhing with Navin's touches. He couldn't move, but he
couldn't hold still either. His need was too big for his body, and then it
burst and he shouted as the world went white.
HERE on February 16... Master Key
Marquis
and Navin have it all—they’re hot, they’re young, they’re successful, and
they’re crazy about each other.
So why isn’t it working?
Marquis can’t show up on time, if he shows up at all, and Navin has stopped caring because the alternative is dumping Marquis for making him feel unimportant. They’re trapped by their insecurities, their work obligations, and their inability to actually talk to each other.
Marquis makes a last ditch effort at reconciliation by offering Navin a chance to lock him up—in a cock cage. It’s their first try at kink, but no matter how hot it makes them, they quickly learn that spice in the bedroom is no substitute for honest communication.
Master Key can also be found in the Rules to Live By BDSM anthology with other tales by Cari Z, Anna Zabo, and Heidi Belleau & Lisa Henry.
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